Monday 16 March 2015

Feedback from 1st Draft





There are a lot of blank spaces within my music video which I intend to fill with narrative, yet have had trouble organising to film this.  However, I screened what I had so far and this is the feedback I received:






From this feedback, I can focus on filling the blank spaces, particularly by including more narrative so it is clearer.  However, I am glad they liked the costume and lighting of my performance footage.

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