Friday, 28 November 2014

Pitch Feedback and Changes

After pitching to the class, I received feedback on what was positive about my ideas and what could be developed further.

From my feedback, I know that they liked my initial ideas for my artist, such as their costume and make-up style.  They also thought the concept for my narrative was interesting, and thought my Goodwin elements worked well.

However, I need to complete my storyboards and animatic as I have finally settled on a music video idea.

New Locations

After looking through my first test photographs, I liked the colours of the graffiti, yet thought it looked too urban and did not convey my genre of indie/pop.  I want to reshoot locations for my music video, places that have quite a vintage feel to it, and decided on Notting Hill and Greenwich.

Notting Hill





Greenwich







After presenting this idea in my pitch, my teacher suggested a vintage shop in Lewisham.  I researched them and found some photographs.  I plan to contact them and visit, asking if I am able to do some filming there.








Pitch




Audience Profiling


Initial Music Video Ideas

I printed off the lyrics to my chosen song, Dog Days Are Over by Florence + The Machine.  I read through them and annotated any meanings and ideas for narrative to use within my music video  (click to enlarge).