Final Cut

Fifth Draft

Music Video Feedback

We screened our nearly finished music videos and received feedback sheets on the developments we had made.  Here is some of what I received:

These feedback sheets show I have made significant improvements to my music video, particularly with adding and developing my narrative and including elements of Goodwin's theory.  For example, the link between visuals and lyrics, as well as visuals and music.  I think I need to make minor changes such as including transitions between shots to make it more visually interesting.  I also hope to adapt the ending so it builds more as the song does, possibly including more cuts, then I think it will be complete.

Fourth Draft

Third Draft

Second Draft

First Draft